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Tips: Use more adjectives and adverbs: wonderful, suprising, cautiously etc. Use comparisons: run like the wind, as quiet as a mouse, as white as a sheet, swim like a fish, as black as night, cry liek a baby, as fresh as daisy, shake like a leaf, as busy as a bee, as strong as an ox etc. Use a variety of verbs: he screamed, whispered, threatened, promised, admitted etc. Adj.Adv.:
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